(If relevant)Scripting
I reckon in the academicals scene, there should be a teacher praising the main character on his reason test, revealing what he got (which will be a high mark), shortly before the main character is approached by his peers, who attempt to persuade him to leave with them, and leave his studying.
In the football scene, I would prefer to see at the main character going past at least 2 players expressing reasonable pace and skill, before slotting a goal in.
In the drug-dealing scene, I suppose we should make a deal in an unusual way, conveying the main character’s slyness. Possibly by dealing the drugs through a handshake or a bump into the other participant of the deal.